Secret Garden

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Poems that will make you Cry

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†Secret Garden

 

There is a secret garden, where heaven an hell collide.

The garden to the end of life a one way ticket to suicide.

My stolen life Iíve giving back to the garden of life and death

Where just a single red rose lived and died with my last breath

The devils eye was watching but god was who I found

He gently laid me in my grave to sleep beneath the ground

Then placed down a single red rose near by for me to keep

In the garden of life and death where the rose an I still sleep.

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avatar ioasfhLOIEWHT84INIKSDF o_o
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I think it was really good, but it would have been better if they'd corrected all of the grammatical errors before they submitted it. :)
;o I dont want anyone to think that I'm saying it was bad.
It was great.
I can't write at all ;o
So, how could I say anyting?
I couldn't. :)
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avatar sahra
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As my cheak is hit by silent tears,
my heart is filled with fear,
I realise i will never hold you near.
As i watch the waves crashing to the shore,
I dont think i can take this any much more,
into each life comes pain,
this is driving me insane.
There is rain like teardrops falling from the sky,
this is our last goodbye.
There is no easy way to say,
how much i miss you,
more and more each passing day.
we will be together again someday,
i pray in my heart you will forever stay.
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