Black Cloud Over Life

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 Black Cloud Over Life

 

I want the sun to shine in my life

but all I seem to find is a cutting knife

All I want is a single ray

just for a little brighter day

The sun can't make it through the black cloud

as the storm cries out loud

with the knife I try to cut through

but the cloud is so thick this will not do

I need to get through the black cloud now

but I need someone to show me how

Someone needs to give me a gift

so the black cloud will begin to shift

The gift of joy, hope and peace

so the black cloud will begin to release

The black cloud seems to give me grief

but the gift will help me find relief

with the gift the black cloud will begin to lift

and the rest will continue to rift

when the sun finally breaks through

the joy, hope and peace will begin to show too

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avatar Torn Spaulding
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Im confused did you cut yourself??
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avatar SLAVE
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if anyone on the website / forum can help my depressions in the UK call me :)
0753068636 oooooo :P
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avatar DGibson
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im in the US and wish i could help you. I am studying psycology and have had two close friends and a close family member all kill themselves.
Also many people from my school call me when they are upset and depressed. the one thing that i find a constant in healing from depression is to have faith and live like you will die tomorrow. no matter how badly it hurts go walk around to see life or invest your time in things you have always wanted to try. Its worth it in the long run. I promise you that.
it'll be ok my dear. there are also anti stress pills that help you chill that can be found at drug stores. If you cut try running or exersicing instead. It stimulates the same andophens that you get from cutting.
good luck
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avatar Cindy
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Awesome. Such a great poem . Thanks for sharing this with us .
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